2008年12月27日 星期六

Sweeping analysis of research reinforces media influence on women’s body image(Revise)

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition Class
24 December 2008

Sweeping analysis of research reinforces media influence on women’s body image

While women are mentioned in media, people often emphasize on their figures and outside beauties. Frances’s legislature worries this kind of advertisement will mislead people’s judgments and decides to put a ban against media which will have some bad influences on women. Researchers hold positive appraisal toward this decision and think that offers citizens a chance to think over. What kinds of information about women will we get form the media? Will we be guided to a wrong value about them? Although this policy does has outcomes, these researchers still hope that women can have their own abilities to think whether these resources are worth believing and changing themselves.

Media really has great power to change people’s consideration. This article gives us an example about how it works in the society. It is an efficient way to spread some new concepts and inform the masses about them. These ideas will circulate among people and become the issues they are discussing about. It is a good phenomenon that every citizen can fully express their personal points of view without interference.

Therefore, more and more people start to use television and other media as a way to advocate their new ideas about female issues. Gradually, more and more senses of people's right and will which we have never known before are revealed. Besides, people are more familiar with this kind of new thoughts.

By this way, women get to know more information about their positions in the society. Their thought and feelings are limited from long time ago. But, this situation changes through a long period of time. Now, they begin to understand that they can make choices for many things by themselves. With their own considerations and abilities, they can deal with their own errands instead of blessed by other people.

References
Madeline, F. (2008, May 8). In University of Wisconsin-Madison News.
From http://www.news.wisc.edu/15215

Opting Out? Why Women Really Quit Careers and Head Home(Revise)

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition Class
24 December 2008

Opting Out? Why Women Really Quit Careers and Head Home

Pamela Stone summarizes the book, Opting Out? Why Women Really Quit Careers and Head Home, and discusses some important aspects of it. The records show that more and more women quit their job for taking care of their children and husbands. Part of the reason is also the pressure these women get from work. The book means to help them get rid of the anxiety from work and let them return to their career. This decision alters some women’s lives as being a full-time mother and makes them have the courage and opportunity to prove their extraordinary abilities for their work.

As a matter of fact, a great number of women are tired of being a working mother. They have to compete with the male coworkers in the company, and after finishing their job, there are more and more stuffs to do in their family such as cooking and cleaning dishes. My mother is one member of these mothers. She feels tired of dealing housework after back from her company and always hopes my brother and I can help her with these chores in family. Her experience tells most working mother’s toil. In this condition, some women would like to stay at home and deal with the housework. Being a housewife can be a way to get out of their jobs and find some place to rest both mentally and physically. At that time, that may be a good thing for them.

However, few women want to remain at home for the rest of their lives. They will hope for the opportunities to get back their work even it is a challenge for them. This article gives us a right direction about this issue. No matter staying at home or going out to work, women should have their own opinions to make the choices. Then, if having the difficulties adapting the works or environment, they can find somebody to consult about these things like their mother or other professional consultant. Therefore, they can know exactly what the problem is and work for it. Sometimes, things are not as difficult as people imagine if they can figure out the right way to fix it.

References
Pamela, S. (2008, December). In EBSCOhost Web.
Fromhttp://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/pdf?vid=10&hid=113&sid=a0fb8979-ec50-4424-9f20-6a8b7f06486d%40sessionmgr109

Career Women Meet Marriage Problem(Revise)

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition Class
24 December 2008

Career Women Meet Marriage Problem

According to the article “Career Women Meet Marriage Problem”, more and more successful women in China still remain single. Most of them are beautiful and have their own career, most of all, they hope to get marriage. But, there are some problems. As their careers are more and more successful, their requirements for their future husband are higher. These ladies think only men who have good conditions can be together with them. That is why when other girls, who are at the same age with these successful women, are married, they still stay single.

As women have more opportunities of education and work, they will tend to think more careful about their marriage like which kind of person will be suitable for them. Although their high standards make them be single when they have already passed the proper age for marriage, it still is a positive way for them to think like that. At least, they know that they have to be serious about the relationship they will have with another guy in the future. In some way, the attitude in this article will prevent them from a bad or wrong marriage.

Many people regard marriage as the necessary part of their lives. Of course this is an important thing. However, if you determine to have marriage with someone you do not really love or know him. Then, it will turn out to be a disaster. These women who have great accomplishments are willing to pay their time to think which kind of people they would like to have to become their family members.

References
(2006, November 6) In China Daily.
From http://www.chinadaily.com.cn/citylife/2006-11/06/content_725813.htm

Divorce Statistics and What They Mean(Revise)

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition class
24 December 2008

Divorce Statistics and What They Mean

Divorce Advice from the Real Craft Lady

Within “Divorce Statistics and What They Mean”, the author points some influences which divorce gives to the society. Recently, divorce becomes a common way to solve the domestic arguments and problems, and less people would like to step into marriage. Besides, the time for applying for divorcement costs almost one year, that makes people be more serious about the next marriage. However, kids who grow up in broken families have higher inclination to commit suicide. These numbers may give us warnings to rethink prudently about the married divorce.

For decades ago, divorce is not a common way to see among people. No matter what kind of difficulties, which can not be work out, between the husband and wife, they would prefer to tolerate these things rather than asking for departing each other. Nevertheless, more and more people regard this as the best and most convenient way for terminating their marriage. Due to this reason, people easily get into marriage with the persons they love, and when they finally know that some problems appear, they break up.

After divorcing with their husband or wife, they often can not be repaired anymore. Not only the couple but also their children will be harmed. Even their parents seldom notice about that. When these parents do not know how their kids feel about this thing, it is easy for these poor kids to commit suicide or allured by other bad temptations. Eventually, this kind of carelessness will cause serious problems in the society.

Indeed, these numbers are the sign to show this phenomenon which we should notice. No matter people are before or after getting marriage, they should hold the cautious attitude toward these things. This is not like a children’s game which you can cease at anytime as you want. Many people are eager to marry someone when they are thirty or forty something. They are afraid that if they do not have marriage before this age, their parents or other relatives would keep talking about this issue. That is not the right attitude. If you do not have enough determination to start your marriage, then there is not necessary to be hurry about that.

References
B Steel (2007, June 6). In Socyberty. From http://www.socyberty.com/Advice/Divorce-Statistics-and-What-They-Mean.12519

2008年12月11日 星期四

Midtern Exam Revise

From “A New Metaphor of the Language Art”, Baines remarks some methods to improve students’ writing abilities. When doing the writing, students are required to gather the reference sources they need beforehand and know which kind of people will be the major readers for their articles. After that, teacher will teach some skills of composing a article. Then students are allowed to discuss with their classmates and let them know whether their have some weak points in their articles. At the same time, teacher plays the auxiliary role to help them correct their problems by themselves and provide students with his comments and opinions. This makes pupils know clearly how to improve their writing proficiency.

Except for the way of writing, computers are used more often by teachers to guide their students how to write a good essay recently. In many schools, this high-tech products art put in almost every classroom and students can use during break time as their will. As a matter of face, the convenience and practicability of computer are undoubted. On the internet, people can find thousands or millions of sources and other people’s opinions toward to same issue. By comparing their point of view, pupils can gain more abilities of thinking and judgment. Therefore, they can make out whether the argument other people are talking about is reasonable and believable.

Writing is never an easy thing. We usually do not know what kind of advices we should give to our readers. Take myself for example, whenever being asked to write a comment or essay on literary works which have been taught in class, I always feel worried and do not know where to start my writing. Even if starting to write my paper, I am still not clear about the whole part of the information which I want to present to people. Then it is hard for me to think of some strong points or examples to support my view point in it. Therefore, the methods which Baines offers in his article are necessary and useful. Be prepared before you are going to write, and let people know the central content in your essay. In addition, you can add some experiences or examples into the article. That will make it more convincing.

Like what Baines says, we should make plan about the structure of the essay. It certainly will let you feel much easier to write. However, people often incline to make whole things perfectly, and then they start to do it. Actually, this is not a good way and you are probably waste too much time on that. People should regard writing as a way to push themselves to think deeper in more aspects. If they do like this, some interesting ideas which they have never thought before will come our, and that will make out the compositions more abundant for readers.

After obtaining these tips of writing, you should also practice it as possible as you can. Please remember that “writing is not an easy thing.” Only read and write more than others can let you make great progress and that is the right conception which all pupils should have about writing.

2008年12月4日 星期四

Advices to Everyone

To Patient
In the responses, you analyze the article closely. Adding much more of your own opinion will make it better. Many sentences can be combined into a larger paragraph and should be written as concise as possible. Moreover, do not write the summary and response separately and notice the sentence coherence.

To Dimitri
In the first paragraph, there is a coherent problem before talk about the affection of computer. In addition, the second sentence in the second paragraph is a run-on sentence. That is too long and may let readers feel confused about your topic. But it is good to share your own learning experience with the readers.

To Sophia
I suggest you to summarize the original article with your own words. It is better not to quote too much from the primary one. In the third paragraph, it is improper to use on the other hand as the transitional word. It is because that the process to compose the argumentation and normal articles is the same. Their connections are not opponent.

To Ocean
Remember to make your works written in several paragraph next time. In your article, there are some run-on sentences. Please try to think about their connection and make proper adjustment. Moreover, all things you are talking about are the original article. Perhaps you can write some of your person idea.

To Candy
Some of your sentences are weird. Be aware of the structure of every sentence and each sentence only has one subject and verb. In the second paragraph, you transit the topic too fast from mentioning the vitality of sharing opinions with classmates to how useful the blog is. To describe more connections between them will make the article more fluent and persuasive.

To Beverly
I have noticed that there are some grammatical problems in your composition. Maybe you can reexamine and correct them. The last two sentences in the last paragraph are weird. It seems that they do not have too much connection with the last paragraph. What does that mean to make our article more beautiful? Please use more accounts to describe their relationship.

To Claire
In your composition, you mention “I think” for several times. This is already your works and you can talk what ever you think about the article. Therefore, there is no need to write that. Besides, you write quite well. There is not too much problem in your essay.

To Joyce
I think the problems you have in this article are basic ones. You use words in a wrong way. Maybe you can consult the dictionary about the corrective use of these words. Then, you will know better whether the word is a noun or verb and which preposition you should use in sentences.

To Elsa
You need some transitional words between the third and fourth paragraph and you do not mention the in-class discussion with classmates in your summary. You talk more about computer in the last three paragraphs. Listing some reasons why you think this is more important that other ways will help readers know why you focus on that issue.

To Vivi
Your summary of the original article is good. In the third paragraph, you share your experience with the readers. But, you almost use “I” as the subject of every sentence. Try to use different structures to write the sentences and compose your article will make it become better work.

To Roxy
I advise you to write the composition and summary in your own words because that you quote many sentences from the original article. In addition, you can try to rearrange the topics that you mention in each paragraph because it is not coherent.

2008年12月2日 星期二

Midtern Exam

From “A New Metaphor of the Language Art”, Baines remarks some methods to improve students writing abilities. Before doing the writing, students have to think about the content of the paper and the readers they are writing for. Then, teacher should let students to discuss with their classmates. Students can know their weak points by their peers and try to correct these problems by themselves. Afterward, the teacher should provide his comment and opinion about student’s composition. It will be much clear for students to know what kind of knowledge they should have while writing their paper. Moreover, these students should also be told how to use computer to do their writing.

Writing is never an easy thing. We usually do not know what is the most important thing and advice we should give the reader. Even if knowing how to start out writing, we do not have very clear thought about the whole structure of it. That will make our point of view become week. Therefore, like what Baines says, people should make a plan about how to compose it and make it clearly offered in front of others.

People often plan all things they want to tell perfectly, and then they start to write. This is not a very good way to write. We should regard writing as a way to develop our way of thinking. In this way, we gradually know what is the point we have and we can find more interesting ideas which we have never thought about. That will makes out composition more abundant for readers. .

2008年11月6日 星期四

Reflection of the Meeting

In our first class, teacher asks us to choose a subject and make a title for our position paper. Then I make my title name “is it necessary for people to have marriage?” It is because that people’s opinion toward marriage has great change in recent years, and I want to tell people that good marriage depends on trust and love by each other. They do not have to panic when being close to the proper age of marriage. But teacher tells me that this title is too broad and these “people” should be focused on specific part of the masses. That time I make a little change about it. I turn it into “is it necessary for career women to have marriage?” People are narrowed down to “career women.”

After starting writing my position paper and doing each weeks’ assignments, I still find some problems. I think my title can be easily leaded to another kind of discussion about women. In the end, the way of talking about marriage will make people feel like a feminist’s aggressive arguing for women’s right. By this meeting, I discuss this problem with teacher, and she explains some important points about what elements should a good paper require to me. Maybe it is time for me to rethink about it.

The purpose for writing this paper is to convey our unique opinions, which are some brand new ideas, to others, and the first step of it is to arouse readers’ interest. This is important. If they consider that you are talking about something old and boring, they will not start reading your paper. Afterward, there should be some conflicts within the paper. People would like to know what kind of idea you raise against the one people used to think about. By understanding the writer’s point of view, people get the opportunity to think more about it even some thought or feelings they have never imagined about.

By analyzing the position paper, teacher tells me that I can write in two ways to account for the situation and thinking of women. One is to compare the attitude from people in different generation to these women like their parents and children. The other is a kind of parallel relations between them and people who are the same generation with them. These are possible lines which I can follow. Then I am suggested to find other people’s theses to support my view point and as the sources to advance the paper. It is because that you can get to know whether this is a worthy talking topic by reading others’ opinion about it.

This meeting helps me to deal with the topic’s problems. But, most of us think that it is really difficult to discuss many things in shortly fifteen minutes. Maybe next meeting we can have more time to talk with teacher about each of us’ paper. That will be better for us to ask questions which we have and start the conversation.

2008年10月23日 星期四

Sweeping analysis of research reinforces media influence on women’s body image

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition Class
24 December 2008

Sweeping analysis of research reinforces media influence on women’s body image

While women are mentioned in media, people often emphasize on their figures and outside beauties. Frances’s legislature worries this kind of advertisement will mislead people’s judgments and decides to put a ban against media which will have some bad influences on women. Researchers hold positive appraisal toward this decision and think that offers citizens a chance to think over. What kinds of information about women we will get form the media and whether we will be guided to wrong value about them? Although this policy does has great result, these researchers still hope that women can have their own abilities to think whether these resources are worth believing and changing themselves.

Media really has great power to change people’s consideration. This article gives us an example about how it works in the society. It is an efficient way to spread some new concepts and inform the masses about them. These ideas will circulate among people and become the issues they are discussing about. It is a good phenomenon that every citizen can fully express their personal point of view without interference.

By this way, women get to know more information about their position in the society. Their thought and feelings are limited from long time ago. But, this situation changes through long period of time. Now, they begin to understand that they can make choices for many things by themselves. With their own consideration and abilities, they can deal with their own errands instead of being bossing by other people.

References
Madeline, F. (2008, May 8). In University of Wisconsin-Madison News.
From http://www.news.wisc.edu/15215

Opting Out? Why Women Really Quit Careers and Head Home

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition Class
24 December 2008

Opting Out? Why Women Really Quit Careers and Head Home

Pamela Stone summarizes the book, Opting Out? Why Women Really Quit Careers and Head Home, and discusses some important aspects of it. The records show that more and more women quit their job for taking care their children and husband. Part of the reason is also the pressure these women get from work. The book means to help them get rid of the anxiety from work and let them return to their career. This decision alters some women’s life as being a full-time mother and makes them have the courage and opportunity to prove their extraordinary abilities for their work.

As a matter of fact, a great number of women are tired of being a working mother. They have to compete with the male coworkers in the company, and after finishing their job, there are more and more stuffs to do in their family such as cooking and cleaning dishes. In this condition, some women would like to stay at home and deal with the housework. Being a housewife can be a way to get out of their job and find some place to rest both mentally and physically. At that time, that may be a good thing for them.

However, few women want to remain at home for the rest of their life. They will hope for the opportunities to get beck their work even it is a challenge for them. This article gives us a right direction about this issue. No matter stay at home or go out to work, women should have their own opinion to make the choices. Then, if having the difficulties adapting the works or environment, they can find somebody to consult about these things like their mother or other professional consultant. Therefore, they can know exactly what the problem is and work for it. Sometimes, things are not as difficult as people imagine if they can figure out the right way to fix it.

References
Pamela, S. (2008, December). In EBSCOhost Web.
Fromhttp://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/pdf?vid=10&hid=113&sid=a0fb8979-ec50-4424-9f20-6a8b7f06486d%40sessionmgr109

Is It Necessary for Career Women to Have Marriage

One of the traditions from China is that parents usually want their son or daughter to marry at very early age. This custom is passed down for hundreds or thousands of years. People regard marriage as one of the most important thing in their whole life. Besides, parents will deal with all those all those trifles for their children, including choose their mates. Then, if you refuse to accept their arrangement for you, that’s great disrespect and disobedience to the older.
As times goes by, some old costumes have faded away, but the importance of marriage has been deeply rooted in our mind. When people who are over thirty or forty years old without being married, they will start to panic and eagerly to find someone else to marry with. People act like this only to fulfill others expectation, like their parents or kinsman. However, having this kind of decision in a haste easily leads to some bad endings, or divorce.
From long time ago, our ancestors came out some thoughts about men and women’s duty, what kinds of characteristics they should have and what part they play in this big society. Those notions somehow turn out to be some kinds of stereotype. From then on, most of us think this pattern is absolutely right and judge our conduct by that. In those rules, men work outside to support the family, and women should stay at home concentrating on housework and dealing with their kids. If thinking that his wife does something bad, the husband can ask she to go home and never come back.
Differ from ancient times, people’s life and values have been changed a lot. Today women have their own career and think more extensively about their future. These alterations make us rethink the necessity of marriage.

2008年10月2日 星期四

Is It Necessary for Career Women to Have Marriage

In traditional China, parents usually want their son or daughter to marry at vary early age. This custom is passed down for many years by lots of people. They regard marriage as one of the most important thing in their whole life, if you don’t get married and raise your own kid, that’s great disrespect to your parents. However, as time goes by, people’s life and values have been changed a lot. These alterations make us rethink the necessity of marriage.
From long time ago, our ancestors came out some thoughts about men and women’s duty, what kinds of characteristics they should have and what part they play in this big society. Those notions somehow turn out to be some kinds of stereotype. From then on, most of us think this pattern is absolutely right and judge our conduct by that. In those rules, men work outside to support the family, and women should stay at home concentrating on housework and dealing with their kids. Differ from ancient times, today women have their own career and think more extensively about their future.

2008年9月28日 星期日

Report: Career women meet marriage problem

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition Class
24 December 2008

Career Women Meet Marriage Problem

According to the article “Career Women Meet Marriage Problem”, more and more successful women in China still remain single. Most of them are beautiful and have their own career, most of all, they hope to get marriage. But, there are some problems. As their careers are more and more successful, their requirements for their future husband are higher. These ladies think only men who have good conditions can be together with them. That is why when other girls, who are at the same age with these successful women, are married, they are still stay single.

As women have more opportunities of education and work, they will tend to think more careful about their marriage like which kind of person will be suitable for them. Although their high requisites make them be single when they have already passed the proper age for marriage, it still is a positive way for them to think like that. At least, they know that they have to be serious about the relationship they will have with another guy in the future. In some way, this attitude will prevent them from a bad or wrong marriage.

References
(2006, November 6) In China Daily.
From http://www.chinadaily.com.cn/citylife/2006-11/06/content_725813.htm

Report: Divorce Statistics and What They Mean

Wendy Chiang
Professor Liang
Composition class
24 December 2008

Divorce Statistics and What They Mean

Divorce Advice from the Real Craft Lady

Within “Divorce Statistics and What They Mean”, the author points some influences which divorce gives to the society. Recently, divorce becomes a common way to solve the domestic arguments and problems, and less people would like to step into marriage. Besides, the time for applying for divorcement costs almost one year, that makes people be more serious about the next marriage. However, kids who grow up in broken family have higher inclination to commit suicide. These numbers may give us warnings to rethink prudently about the married divorce.

For decades ago, divorce is not a common way to see among people. No matter what kind of difficulties, which can not be work out, between the husband and wife, they would prefer to tolerate these things rather than asking for departing each other. Nevertheless, more and more people regard this as the best and most convenient way for terminating their marriage. Due to this reason, people easily get into marriage with the person they love, and when they finally know that some problems appear, they break up. They do not care about the children’s feeling, and of course they also do not know how deep they are harmed. Many kids’ problems start from here.

Indeed, these numbers are the sign to show this phenomenon which we should notice. No matter people are before or after getting marriage, they should hold the cautious attitude toward these things. This is not like a children’s game which you can cease at anytime as you want. Many people are eager to marry someone when they are thirty or forty something. They are afraid that if they do not have marriage before this age, their parents or other relatives would keep talking about this issue. That is not the right attitude. If you do not have enough determination to start your marriage, then there is not necessary to be hurry about that.

References
B Steel (2007, June 6). In Socyberty. From http://www.socyberty.com/Advice/Divorce-Statistics-and-What-They-Mean.12519